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View Poll Results: Which design would you go for ?
First vertical - 1 7 35.00%
Second vertical - 2 1 5.00%
Third vertical - 3 9 45.00%
First horizontal - 4 1 5.00%
Second horizontal - 5 2 10.00%
Third horizontal - 6 0 0%
Last horizontal - 7 0 0%
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Old 25-10-2007, 06:43 PM
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Default Business card various designs

After reading a lot of stuff and having decided to design a new biz card, I wanted something quite bold and simple, black & white. I already tried a biz card with a photo as a background but even if people get attracted to it, it is kinda distractive IMHO and a sleek clean b&w card looks more professional.

I tried some different choices when placing the contact elements and tested a horizontal and vertical design...

Would like to ask YOU which of those you find the more appealing, clean and professional as I personally am balancing between two or three of them ...

Please if you have a couple of minutes, tell me why you like one specific design over the others or what you do dislike.

Thanks bunches in advance ;)

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I like 1 but I'd like to see it half black band and half white, looks a little lost just with the floating black band
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yea my favourites are 1 or 2 (but I dunno if it's better to keep typeface consistency or use another font to make the "photographer" word stand out

I also like 4 but less than the vertical ones

Toon, you mean like that ? Isn't the white space above the contact details too big & empty ?

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Lower the black a bit more then, it doesn't have to be even
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updated, refresh :)
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okay after discussing the matter with some other people, a bunch of subtle changes :



is it any better ?

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maybe adjust the kerning of "photographe" to be the same width as the hairline above it.
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mm, will be kinda awkward to be so wide, maybe better to adjust the hairline to the font instead ?
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I like 1 but something about the font for Photography is making not like it to much.
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scratch what i said. i took it into PS and everything lines up nice... although i do kinda like it layed out like this too

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