Poster for a school project

[viggosmor]

Hi, I´ve been working on a poster for school.
It´s a project where we should make the poster with our favorite movie, and it should be inspired by the graphic designer Saul Bass....

Does anyone know him?

Here is what I have been doing so far...

http://mopsviggo.dk/images/usual2%20copy.pdf

What do you think, constructive thanks

[prewe]

not a bad start, but it seems a little plain to me. and you should maybe use some other fonts. don't know what it is, but something is missing.

[El Peligroso]

I'd maybe change the close up of Kevin Spacey, probably a little tighter on his face then you can show more detail. Also, you could put the Director:Brian Singer over the fingerprint instead of in a seperate box.

check out the links on here too

[viggosmor]

Oki thanks...

I have changed it a bit, before reading your suggestions...

http://mopsviggo.dk/images/usual3a.pdf

What do you think about it now?

It ´s a good idea with the directors name over the finger print, I will tryt that out...

EDIT: http://mopsviggo.dk/images/usual4a.pdf

[flick]

really really good, well done, can tell you have good potential :)

[viggosmor]

Thanks Flick... :-)

[viggosmor]

Doesn´t any one else have some comments, maybe something I could do better, or different?

I have until sunday night to hand the poster in....

:-)

[Arkady]

I think your piece works reasonably well as a pastiche of Bass work from the late 50's early 60's and is well done. The only thing that bothers me is the spelling of Criminals as Criminels.

[viggosmor]

Yes I´ve corrected that, just didn´t show it here, but thanks....

[El Peligroso]

I prefer the director over the finger print, I'd probably have it in the red so it looks cut out though myself.
Also, a little thing but you might want to remove on of the black dots to make it five.
One for each of the main characters...