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Old 23-07-2007, 08:37 PM
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ariel bold

heres the new one ... ive adjusted the typeface weight on certain lines..think it does look better.



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ariel bold

ahh, just adjusted the character settings
nice typography
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Smashing image.
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This is so nearly a great piece - I can see what you're trying to do, but the typography lets it down. It doesn't help that you're using Arial, which apart from anything else is restrictive in the weights available.



When I was a student in Nottingham, I used to collect these flyers as I thought the type and layouts were gorgeous. They were printed onto a kind of recycled card (which is why they're so battered now!). I'm thinking this is the kind of type style that would transform your work? Seems to be a condensed, bold / heavy Helvetica...

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I really like it, great work
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