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Old 04-01-2007, 10:19 AM
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your thoughts on my new stationery would be very much appreciated, feel free to be as honest as you want...

otherwise i'll never learn.
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Old 04-01-2007, 10:48 AM
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really unsure about this. i like something but then i dont like it.. really mixed about this lol..
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Old 04-01-2007, 11:27 AM
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you can't leave it at that man, i need some details

come on, i'm a big boy... i can take it
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Old 04-01-2007, 12:09 PM
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thats just it, i cant pin it down.. might be the colours.. but the colours are fresh, might be the whole cartoon thing.. i really cant pin it. trust me if i knew you would!
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Old 04-01-2007, 12:16 PM
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I'm not 100% about the fonts for ' Heroic ' & ' design solutions ' personally
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Old 06-01-2007, 05:08 PM
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Hi EP...

For me there are just too many different fonts... at least 4 on the compliments slip that i can see... possibly too heavy too.... like the business cards... feel they are working much better.. but still not 100%... maybe you need another colour in there or something...
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Old 07-01-2007, 09:54 AM
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Love the business card! Agree with the others that the fonts look a bit heavy, won't take much to fix it though, just reduce the size and change the layout slightly to space them out with more, should do the trick. And stick with a more simple font like arial for the main text on the letter.

Something like this perhaps?



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Old 08-01-2007, 09:15 AM
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Cheers everyone...

I'll let you see the updated version shortly
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I too like the card design. I know the design was sort of 'super hero-ish' but I couldn't help thinking 'flasher-is'

Up-Side - It made me imagine a company young, fresh and not at all stuffy to work with.

Colour was unusual and funky.

Downside - the words young, funky and fresh do not usually go along with Professional, dependable and respectable.
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Old 12-01-2007, 09:56 PM
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EP is definately Fresh and Funky when he gets going the design world won't know whats hit it. Shame he can't find a premier league club to support.
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