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Old 13-01-2007, 09:16 AM
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Five days late but here goes: I'd make the logo a bit smaller on the letterhead and comp slip, and make sure that the elements are aligned with each other.

On the logo itself, try making 'design solutions' a more legible, classic typeface, and then use this same face for your contact details on the right-hand side.

Business card is pretty cool and would stick in the mind!
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The business card is great. Other than that .. agree with the rest .. work on the fonts a bit.
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Old 09-02-2007, 12:09 PM
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I agree with James in that you could make the logo a bit smaller and maybe make it so it says Heroic Design Solutions along the bottom of the logo like this.


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Old 09-02-2007, 12:28 PM
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Where's his mouth??
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Old 09-02-2007, 12:41 PM
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Maybe make the letterhead centred like this


also perhaps a dot on the "I" in "heroic"

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Old 09-02-2007, 01:04 PM
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I quite like it centred
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Old 12-02-2007, 09:16 AM
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I like that you're from Sheffield.

I'm in Shef too.
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Old 12-02-2007, 09:22 AM
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A few of us are, introduce yourself in the intro section, they'll soon find you.
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Old 12-02-2007, 11:40 AM
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Or go straight to the advertising section like most other rude people!! lol
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Old 12-02-2007, 12:08 PM
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here it is:

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