World Wide Web billboard/poster

[Shinwow]

Was designed to be a poster originally, but due to me cutting some parts out I decided to make it more of a billboard size. Obviously the size has been cut down for the forum.

The text spiralling around looks a little dodgy I know.

The bright light is meant to be the end of the phone line (e.g the internet) and is to advertise the world wide web as being the best of British design (apparently the web was British although the internet was American) and to get you to vote for it.

Any comments or improvements I could make in the future?

[Laura Lynne]

It's good very atmospheric, I'd make the text a little bigger in the middle.

[Web Design Geek]

Maybe some white sparks or text somewhere to bring it out a little

[flashwiz]

Id love to see the www.vote in some kind of simple spiralling perspective... disappearing into the void so to speak.... nothing over the top thou... just simple...

[Mailno]

seems lost in the middle of a big space