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Old 23-04-2007, 11:50 AM
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Default coming together.

Just knocked together.. just a bit of a advertisement of sorts i suppose. for a blog me and a couple of mates are putting some efforts into.

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Old 23-04-2007, 01:39 PM
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I'd like to see the type on the blue instead of the hands, nice enough though
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Old 24-04-2007, 12:09 AM
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Nice job Will. Do you have the experience to brighten the photo. Mainly the sky would be nicer if it was brighter.
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Old 25-04-2007, 02:21 PM
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I agree about brightening the image, but the design is great. Nice job.
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Old 27-04-2007, 09:48 AM
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The composition in all ways is god, try only with "Auto Levels" in Photoshop over the picture. This can grow up the life of the "foto".

Do tou try to put the URL over a black bar? A black bar with the same height of tipography, and the lenght go to the right side of the picture.
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Old 27-04-2007, 10:46 AM
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I'm confused to what you mean juan, with the black bar ?
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Old 27-04-2007, 10:51 AM
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I think he means something like this...

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Old 27-04-2007, 10:53 AM
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on the address in the bottom corner though i think...
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Old 27-04-2007, 10:59 AM
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Some like this...
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Old 27-04-2007, 11:01 AM
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Ahh yes, good job that does look better, i would just curl those edges and BAM it would be awesome.
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