Greenpeace

[Starscream]

Bit of a idea..

[El Peligroso]

i'd maybe look at having the greenpeace text and the live, breath, grow, plant texts lined up. just looks a little off balance to me at the minute, nice start though.

Nice pic too, the colours in the sky in particular

[Toon]

Great idea bad font choice. You need more of an impact font or something a little stylized. Great image and colours

[El Peligroso]

you could maybe grab colours out of the image to use for the four lines

example: for the breathe line - select a light blue from the bottom right of the sky
for the grow line - select a green from the grass
for the plant line - select a brown from the tree

just a thought...

[Keely Hope]

I really like it but I agree with the above comments

[Laura Lynne]

i like it, it stands out well

[Carrotnapper]

:o i quite like the font

[Cwilk]

First off for the positives:

It's nice and bright and the green is great.

Now for the negatives:

I know that it's probably a seasonal thing and the tree will bloom, but the tree looks dead. Unfortunately dead doesn't work because your ad has become a negative. Some ads work well as a negative, but I wouldn't think Greenpeace should have negative connotations.

Font suggestions were already giving above so I'll leave that alone.

On another note....it's nice to see quality designers who are still in their teens.

[Starscream]

Thanks!
*keeps a mental note*