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Old 12-04-2007, 06:49 PM
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hi, would u please review my new banner, tell me how it is and tell me wat can i do to improve it ,




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fixed your picture link for you here it is....
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fixed your picture link for you
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I think it's really nice, it's a shame the text doesn't stand out a little better, maybe if you put an outer glow on the text it might improve the visibility
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I think it's really nice, it's a shame the text doesn't stand out a little better, maybe if you put an outer glow on the text it might improve the visibility
thanx , ill see wat i can do
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i agree with Laura, your types isn't easy readable. Maybe with a shade below...
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i think the type should be slightly darker
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i i have made the title a litle darker, and added shadow as well, and some glow,

her is the new version,

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its better but when the t from net hits the temple thing, it is hard to read.
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Old 13-04-2007, 11:16 AM
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i have adjusted it, it should be easier to read now.
actually the building is Badshai Mosuqe. it was built by the Mughal Emperors when they ruled india and pakistan. it is also a fort.

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