Emotions speak louder then words

[Starscream]

I made this one as a attempt for a Apple iPod ad.. It doesn't at all boast any of the features of ipod. It's just a warm image with a happy woman.

[SugarSpunSister]

Lovely, works well.

[Toon]

Yeah the type stands out so well

[NagaChi]

Nice. Totally brings out what people want to feel when getting an iPod. :)

[Starscream]

Woo ! thanks :)

[Existence]

Lovely~ XD

[Miss Leona]

The type looks a little squashed to me, I'd space it out a tiny bit

[L[Design]]

Very nice overall! I am really one for simplicity and this is just that. I am stuck on "louder", not sure what to do, or if it needs changed, the word is....well "BAM" and it's color leaves it subdued. Is that intentional? IMO. But overall, I think it works well and would blend well with apple overall, a new take on their white space, like you said, gives a bit of warmth. Well Done!

[sweetfeetjaded]

simplicity is always the key.

[zumojuice]

I really like it.

You can imagine if this were a live apple ad, they'd demand to be able to see the white earphone cords, so you knew it was an iPod and nothing else... Saying that, I am not sure that having the cords would ruin the simplicity you've got. Good Job.