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Old 02-04-2007, 04:20 PM
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(Pink looks a lot nicer in print rather than screen safe colours if anyone know of a strong but decent screen pink let me know)
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Have you tried using a brush stroke for the symbol? The text is fine, but the symbol looks like its been done in MS Paint.
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It's a sharp image it's just the pink is blurred because it's not web safe.
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I'd try a brush stroke on the pink part. The color contrast is real sharp, and the brush stroke will bring an organic feeling that will give a good dicotimy (Spelling error riddled sentence) to the steel backdrop, therefore elevating the logo to real artistic level.
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i wonder what the sign would look like in a deep red?
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in deep red i think it would blend into the background too much
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This is with the font, not sure if it's strong enough...

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Old 03-04-2007, 10:37 AM
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Some more better, symbol different colours...



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i like the second one, it stands out!
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Without gradient is better:batman:
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