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Old 29-03-2007, 10:58 AM
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nice, colours work well

not 100% on the 'life' font. a bit too lightweight for me but other than that very good indeed
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lovely. what else to say. i like everything about it, i like these kind of designs, maybe because it reminds me of a portfolio-thing i never finished once.

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I don't like the date, it's one of the most important things and it didn't stand out but for some strange reason when I put brackets round it it looked 50 times better??
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Old 29-03-2007, 11:18 AM
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lovely. what else to say. i like everything about it, i like these kind of designs, maybe because it reminds me of a portfolio-thing i never finished once.

http://lindroos.nu/v3/ (click the green button if it doesn't show right away, then you know what i mean)
Yeah, I remember that one, why didn't you finish it?
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Old 29-03-2007, 11:19 AM
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i don't know really, i wanted something new and i got bored of that one, now i have none instead..
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Looking great. One thing you could try on the date is making the 2007 large and screened back green (similar to the treatment of "good" on back only not turned on edge) then upsize the rest of the date and keep the brackets and let it overlap the year. Might be a way to add a bit more interest to the date line and tie into backside as well. Just a thought.
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it looks pretty good.

for some sort of show graphics i think it'll be better if it had more contrast
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I love it I think the type is perfect
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Perhaps make the date the same gray as the background? The white-on-green doesnt work.

Really really nice though.
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