Crit Merci

[Kylie]

WAY behind on this and its probably finished, but how about the date in orange or another contrasting colour?

[Keely Hope]

I would'nt add any other colours. It's such a nice piece because of the two contrasting colours.

[kip]

great readability and use of varied swiss fonts, well done

[Lyrics]

This is strong, i find it appealing, it's simply easy and satisfying to observe. The bottom half of the left page is the major highlight/success. You have a section in that area where all the elements appear connected and correctly joined, be it the color, location, or neighboring elements that one element transitions into.