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Old 29-07-2008, 05:02 PM
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Comments and suggestions welcome! These are concepts with small quotes i have gathered over my recent month stay in florence, Italy. I have over 75 small quotes and was thinking of creating a small series of posters, or eventually a small scaled booklet of different designs. Started as my travel writing project, but has since developed further.

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The type seems a bit weak for me, I like to be able to read clearly
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the second one is better. The first one is quite weak type-wise with no real form, or focal point. work on your main type first, then add the background later... The second one is much stronger and with a little more work could be amazing...
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