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Old 19-06-2008, 09:25 AM
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I like that, but I think a slightly gradiated (is that even a word?!) deep red would suit better.
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Old 19-06-2008, 09:31 AM
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That's the one! Love it.
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I like the graduated red, could even stand to go even darker at the bottom too..
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the red deeping improves this but I am concerned about the lines at tiny sizes?
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Can I critique this one?
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Oh goody.

I quite like this one. I would ditch the swirly guff for four reasons:
  1. It's irrelevant and necessary.
  2. It's weakly and clumsily glued on to the ‘g’ and it looks too much like an after thought.
  3. It will get lost at small sizes and look odd large.
  4. It makes the marque far too tall and throws the balance off.
I would be inclined to just keep the ‘g’, possibly with a few tweaks to give it a bit more character.

Other than those points it's pretty nice. The type is good, although if you had a sans-serif with a two-storey ‘g’ that might look rather spiffy.

Only other suggestion would be to lose the gradient and go with a strong solid colour.

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Still doesn't help me as I've been paid and the guy's happy, tweaking it wouldn't put any more cash in my bank account but cheers for the crit
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