whats your suggest about this logo

[germacran]

Hi
my first letters of my nae is MAI and I want to make it logo
for my designs
I designed this form but I,m not admired it exactly




the word "design is not necessary I add it randomly
can any one suggest some thoughts better than this?

[Toon]

I think you should work with a thicker font

[zumojuice]

The MAI combination is perhaps not the clearest it could be, seeing as you have made the stroke of the 'M' and 'A' combined. While this works in essence, it could become lost in being easily readable, especially as with the 'I', it can start to look like 'MN'. Just a thought.

[e.alexander]

i tend to like things a little bit on the wild side, to me, its dull and TOO simple, but depending on what kind of design u do will determin if this logo works for you. post some of your work and i can give u a more correct answer.

[ifohdesigns]

I'd have to agree with Toon, a thicker font will work much better in this case. If the "design" part is not necessary, then take it out. If it is necessary, then I would give it some room to breath in there with some spacing (try the thickness of your "M" first straight line going up), and use that all the way around it.

Either that, or some negative space, and make the "design" knocked-out.

[zumojuice]

hell, if you're just wanting an ident, just use the counters and small text underneath. There is a lovely example of these in feb's CR. Annoyed they got to do it before me though...

[germacran]

this is a sample card I want your suggestions about this design and logo



see you next time

[Toon]

General is wrong

[zumojuice]

Why would you want to write 'Business Card' on it?

[Miss Leona]

Try a more interesting font than Arial