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Aside from shooting your hands over a rail and imposing them on the image there may not be too much you can do. I will say that the image you have created looks good it was only on the third look and your description did I see that there was anything to be worried about. The average viewer will not see what you or I see.
Not sure if this helps but good work. Patrick |
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A thing that really throws the image off is that you've put some kinda haze surrounding your body that separates you from the rest of the image and looks very unnatural.
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The picture is in Derby. Does the picture look ok then guys/gals, can you tell that thats not the original sky etc and the rails aren't actually in that location? |
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loose the motion blur and i think it will make it look more natural. At the moment u can kinda tell that the sky has been put in there
as for rails, again the haze from your hands / motion blur make them look un natural and if you look at your left arm, you have no hand?
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Get rid of that motion blur layer.
If you NEED to have it in there, then at least change the blending mode of the layer to something that looks a bit more natural.
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I assumed from the composition that the image was more photo art then trying to be photo realism. It is cool composition and one that could run in an ad etc. Not one that could be published in a newspaper.
I agree with the above ditch the blur as well. Still good work thanks for posting. |
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