Please review this design

[ronen1313]

I have designed a flyer that I want to use to advertise my business, but I wanted the opinions of a few designers to see how I may improve the design. The flyer will be Letter size and full color.

Here are links to the file for viewing:
PDF version: quality not so great: http://www.visualacuitydesign.com/images/MedicalNTM.pdf
& Here is a JPG: http://www.visualacuitydesign.com/images/MedicalNTM.jpg

Your reviews will be greatly appreciated. Just a side not I designed it in Microsoft Publisher.

Thanx,

Ronen

[brokendalek]

There's not much wrong with it as far as I can see

[dannynosleeves]

I think its a good start. I would maybe paly around with some different fonts. That much arial bores me.

Id love to see any changes you make.

[ianm]

looks ok - i'd lose all the black lines if i were you though and the main massage image looks real low res.

[maritsaki]

I agree with both dannyonsleeves and ianm, the font is too "normal" and I'm not too sure about the image but maybe that's just the resolution... The general layout is ok and the colours but the black lines make it too harsh.

[ianm]

the thing about the lines - especially your border - is that if that goes to print most of the black line may get chopped so to escape it looking odd you may as well lose it

[Mack]

id say, better "massage" image. Maybe a softer color palette

[Arkady]

I keep reading this thread and thinking what bloody lines; what is everyone talking about. And then I took a look at the PDF. Of course in the jpg there are no lines.

[Toon]

I only viewed the jpg and thought I was missing something

[ianm]

it's been changed ;)