Gotta Say I'm not feeling it. The concept is kinda cool though. you might start recreating it from scratch. The line width for your arrows could be thicker or thinner. there needs to be some kind of focus to where you want people to look first and then follow a path through the rest of your design.
Start with a really cool 2 or something and work out from there. Try using 1 font only.
I like the colors but maybe use colors either more somewhat analogous or that are complimentary.
It will get there, good Idea.
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