It think that it is a good jumping off point. I like your choice in in colour and imagery.
I think that If yo are trying to make it like a poster, you could do a number of different ways, if you are going down this route I would suggest that you go back to historical posters and use reflect some elements that seem to be consistent. However I think that your style choice is good if you are happy with it.
I like your font choice for Bright Bean, however, design is slightly difficult to read for a logo, you shouldn't ever really space out lowercase letters. And I think that the Bean light bulb could be toned down a little bit as far as colour and given a little more style.
I think the image of your son is a great photo, I agree that the clipping, the way it is now is distracting (specifically around his head).
All in all I think that it is good, just a couple of details to mess around with really. Good Work!
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