Mmmmm design-wise it looks good.
Few things to polish though:
Background dots - these create good contrast by also the moire and creat shimmer and distraction.I'd look at fading them back a tad?
Your banner image - the cut out looks dodgy - and not in a styled way and the text does not excite me at all. If have that as a image or flash - why not use it to whck a little more design style into it. A little work at that will be a great attention puller, next to your image...
You have this really nice diagonal feature that you could make more of in relation to this banner?
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