I didn't vote because I don't think any of them are finished.
Number four has the best typography and a pretty nice mark but the composition isn't great.
Try making a slightly neater brush stroke for the horse in Illy and try to find a more natural placement for the ‘Jockey Club’ text. At the moment it looks very tacked on.
Last edited by paddy; 25-04-2008 at 02:18 PM.
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