I was contacted last week and asked to provide a sample logo, to revamp their old one. The red wavy line is an important part of their logo and MUST stay, I was told. But other than that, they want wanted a clean, bright, professional looking logo and web page. (I get to do that if they like what I've done here...)
So, old logo:
New Logo:

(obviously ignore the crossed lines)
Any feedback here before I send this off to them?
Thanks!