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Old 21-04-2008, 10:19 AM
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Your front page has a lot of space which is fine, but your other pages feel crammed in comparison. Your navigation system is also not the clearest thing, but I think the main thing is structure...

How do you want people to see this? The homepage asks a lot of questions. The navigation then jumps into a new format when clicked, which can confuse visitors.

I'd consider going for a 'services' 'portfolio' and about us sections or something.

Oh and crop the pick & mix on the front page. I don't it's requires with the logo there and just typed in, it looks lost next the rest.

A good solid start though...
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