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Old 17-04-2008, 11:38 PM
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It's a good site. My only major thing would be to move the portfolio bit up a little so that it does not all off the bottom of smaller screens height-wise.

Something about your web typography though just does not feel quite polished yet. I think it's because you navigation looks similar to your tag line(skills) and had no visual pull apart from them. It looks a little sloppy near that logo which is so polished is all.

And agreed on the flash. if that image is not going to do anything but show titles, lose it. Or develop it, make it a centre piece of textures and type.
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