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Old 13-04-2008, 08:41 AM
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Yellow60 - This was really nice top start. The text for 'one moment please' could be a more in keeping colour but otherwise ok. The yellow page is a fair shock after that mind, minro things. Make the text clickable on your buttons as users (such as I did) will want click. Line the titles with the text below if possible, though that might just be me.
Move your portfolio navigation up and reduce a little...

SCM_Your navigation is huge so I'd reduce that first of all, looks a bit cartoony... You opening about us page has far too much content for that space With the indent of the left, and ragging on the right - it's hard to read. I'd sort this out and use the tape measure to better split between that and the services list. The whole thing could do with a little white space to pad it out a bit.
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