I isn't just about ease to read (yes that is important) but what what is being said from a lot of people is that it doesn't look like you have intentionally set the type. So as far as whether you like it loose or not, you look like you just slapped it on there. If that is the impression you want to send off, well then that is your choice.
Personally I think you need to choose a better type faces anyways. I would also try to add a little bit more contrast between your background and your text, without adding more strokes. Just some thoughts.
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