If you simplfied it, it could work really well.
Perhaps consider dropping the backdrop (which i think creates Toon's disco feeling), and perhaps think about the logo. You've got a metallic logo, so why not think about a foil block for it over 'distinct'. It is likely to cost a little more, but may well be worth it.
Toon should be able to quote you a figure.
Also, I'd change owner to director if it's a company as it looks more professional and correct. If it is your freelance company name, then I'd consider dropping the word owner altogether..
|