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Old 12-02-2008, 03:13 AM
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The white one is definitely better imo

I also don't like how everything is in lower caps not so much the headline but the when it starts to say free, it looks a bit unprofessional. The gap between the top and the word unbeatable should be less. The white one should have a border like the black one.

The images on it confuses me, the people jumping looks awkward. The images and the text should be a bit more lined up.

I think that there may be too many colors? I'm not sure, something about them seems a bit off.
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