Very nice overall! I am really one for simplicity and this is just that. I am stuck on "louder", not sure what to do, or if it needs changed, the word is....well "BAM" and it's color leaves it subdued. Is that intentional? IMO. But overall, I think it works well and would blend well with apple overall, a new take on their white space, like you said, gives a bit of warmth. Well Done!
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