I'm going to be the nay-sayer. Sorry. I think the graphic you've illustrated is beautiful, but it's not going to work as a logo. What does it look like at half an inch? The details--the white strokes, the transparency--will get lost. Toon also had a good suggestion, make the tag line a different font than the company name. It'll make it and the company name stand out more. I like the colors, too!
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