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Originally Posted by james
I quite like the pens, adds a bit of colour. Not at all keen on the paint splat on the right or the bubble text for the titles though. Toon's example site is great - its professional and sophisticated, and a client would be more likely to take them seriously imo.
The black one isn't a bad start, but it doesn't tell you anywhere that its a designers site?
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Yeah I feel like without the colors from the pens it gets a little stale (for lack of a better word).
I agree about the splat on the right, I'm not loving it either.
As for the 2nd one, on my original post I stuck a little P.S. down there to let you know to try to imagine it with content filled in underneath (leaves a lot to the imagination I know... sorry hehe). So I would indicate it's a design site there. :)