I quite like the pens, adds a bit of colour. Not at all keen on the paint splat on the right or the bubble text for the titles though. Toon's example site is great - its professional and sophisticated, and a client would be more likely to take them seriously imo.
The black one isn't a bad start, but it doesn't tell you anywhere that its a designers site?
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