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Old 31-10-2007, 10:01 AM
Wilks_eye Wilks_eye is offline
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Wow its very impressive. This is the first time for me to see your site and I assure, you, I am really impressed.The professionalism, attention to detail (yet with the distinct simplicity) really shines through. Good work!

The only thing I have to suggest is the copy. Sentences like

"Griffin Web Design after a few designs and re-designs has now gone live"

can be better in the form of
"After a few designs and re-designs, Griffin Web Design has now gone live"

You kind of get the idea. This is just details really. And I'm sure you could fix the copy in a jiffy.

Still the design is great. Loved the symbolic idea of the flower and web. Lots of luck to you!
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