[Toon]

The idea is fine but the execution is a little off.

1. Try and avoid free techno fonts especially the overused ones, try for clear and sharp.
2. Try a stronger blue
3. Some of your curves are off and you have bumps on some of the edges.

It's a nice start though, you should think about getting is right before uploading it otherwise you'll end up with a portfolio full of non completed logos.