Hi Tommy, I like the simplicity and the illustration. I'm having a hard time really figuring out what the site does (besides reading the tagline) and what I should read first. Generally, if that is the case, then the viewer will just go to another web site. I suggest you create some visual hierarchy and try to guide your viewer's eye to the first most important thing, then the second, etc. Right now, it seems like every element on the page is of the same importance. Hopefully I explained myself okay and this helps you out.
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