You forgot to kern the W"A" :). Like I said, I haven't completed the type yet. I really don't know what I'm going for... I actually wanted a hand written "splashy" look. If you get my meaning.. Like...
Liquid Force Wakeboards | 2007 - liquid force's type is gorgeous. I just don't want it chaotic looking like LF. I'll figure something out I'm sure.
Thanks for your feedback :)