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Old 09-08-2007, 09:47 PM
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I think I would have to agree with Ian about the blocky thing in the corner. The ad overall is good, but those boxes don't make sense. What do they add to the piece? Nothing really, so they should be taken out. They almost look like a mistake (like jpg compression issues) because they are not distinct enough.

The gradient in the corner is appropriate, though, because it helps draw the viewer's eye through the piece.

The rose color (from the photo) that Cwilk mentioned would look good on the company's name (which would also help bring more color unity to the piece).
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