First off I'd like to say that I like your flash work and I think your work is great as well, there are a few suggestions that I have but I'm no expert just a user giving you my opinoin.
Here it goes:
I would suggest using fewer colors. The ones your currently using is not bad, but I would use fewer colors.
On the home page:
I would give the user the option to play the video instead of it beginning right away, actually I would probably include that video somewhere in my about us page or get to know us better but would allow the client to click on the link for the video instead of bombarding them with the sounds, also I would probably make it a little slower and share more information. Another problem I had with the flash is that I turned the sound off but after a couple minutes it came back on, I would definitley suggest not repeating the video.
It seems like your trying to fit everything on one page, I think it would be better to use the appropriate sections for your porfoltio etc or make your preview smaller. With everything being so big, I'm not sure where you want my eyes to go, there kind of everywhere everything is trying to grab my attention, I wasn't sure if I wanted to check your profolio or read the huge blocks to the left(Home Page)
On your Contact us page
I would probably move the phone number and other contact information below the form and move the main text closer to the contact form, also center the text or either make the form and text left aligned.
I would also remove or change the flashing button at the bottom of your page, the one that says "Ready to Get Started"
Well that's it for now I hope that helps.. Overall this is actually one of the better sites I'm seen on this board.
Tanisha
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