I've clicked through to your site before actually, and i'd just like to make an observation if i may? I think there is far far too much text on your website. I really cannot imagine someone wanting to spend all that time required to read all that stuff... That would put me off right away if I was a customer.
It needs to be clearer and more concise what you're offering, as CVW says, people don't have to (and probably won't) hang around.
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