better. Far better actually, I still think that you're typography could do with some tightning up, the colon in your name for example looks off, I'd maybe play about with different fonts. I think a sans serif would work well with the style that you're going for. Maybe play around with the size of the name as well, one big one small or something like that. I dunno, just chucking ideas at you! Looking good though, looking forward to seeing it with content in place!
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