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Old 06-05-2008, 05:51 PM
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I like that. Only two points of note:

1> the placement of the 'software' - it seems to be vaguely lining up but not. I'd go for the centre line of the two 'o's which would just mean a little adjustment but nothing radical.

2> the text on software. It's nice but the 'a' and 'r' and perhaps a little too similar. I'd either manually adjust one or other character or change fonts...
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